i thought the rhyming in this was superb.
the beginning was impressive and it's relative simplicity kind of "prepared" me for the rhyming/ cadence for the rest of it.
the manic depressive who panics and wrestles with Xanax and devils
that's 3 good multi's and a very cool phrase in only 11 words. dope.
oddly all with small testicles whos minds are viewed for tall pedestals
i'd like to see a comma between "testicles" & "whos", for a slight pause or something.
perhaps it was just the "para" format, but i.m.o. that seems to be the spot that isn't as smooth as the rest.
but other than that i've really got no suggestions for this very enjoyable piece.
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