Copycat's verse although it might bring chuckles due to his graviotional force interpretation, and its impact on the feminine corporeality/ physique it lacked the entertaining technical jest that Diode's had. Copycat's flowed well as I found it, and in comparing the renditions I was at first leaning toward Copycat's. But, as I reread I found Diode methodical wording more appealing, and soon the verse began to be more enticing, though a bit off putting due to the sportsmanship acronyms that hindered the second last line.
Anyways, I vote for Diode.
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