this is 100% personal preference with this vote but im going with jilti.
nyc that just wasn't my style at all, and i felt jilti was way more original with it and also brought a nice twist at the end as well as some humor. also a more universally relate-able verse than yours. on a technical standpoint the flow, scheming etc was pretty well equal. both very solid. nyc with more vocab but jilti with a clearer message.
V-jilti
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