Props to both for good pieces
Defiant, liked the emotion in ur verse especially this bar..
What happened to the last few days, how much did I drink? What the fuck did I smoke
Why are you just staring, no words, is that resentment, why haven't we spoke
Probably my favorite line of both verses and it was placed right in the midde of ur verse which is a perfect spot for it. Felt u could've brought a little more complexity to the rhyme schemes
oats, the whole circle of life theme was well executed (no pun intended with the swung from the noose line)
everything was on point. Felt like a "when someone dies, someone is born" type scheme
Mvgt oats
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