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I got zygote here fellas. Adonis is a supreme wordsmith, and painted a decent picture here, which is all it was to me. I understood the meaning, which was essentially to be a shock verse. Ad your structure was good, your words were able as well. Zy also told a shocking story, and I far more resonated with the imagery, and the character development. When the doctor said that he was going to put animal seed into her, my skin crawled....well done. Zy I did not like how you kept saying "we see" but still, your imagery and story telling skills won the day.
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Originally Posted by Consensus
The cerebral assassin, the molder of minds, the Omni potent being. Time transcending traveler, wisdom incarnate. Veritas needs no intro but I guess I have to. He’s not know in the battling world but who doesn’t know veritas? The guy us always original and if you pay attention to his bars, dude brings the heat.. The gawd.
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