[IamBenT]

Lol@Split's use of the word "stillborn", wow.

Great battle.

Zygote(haha) - Fantastic rhymes man, the flow was real solid, easy to go with and yet still intellectually rewarding. What a creepy story and the worst part is alot of this true shit. The ending, its controversial, cuz i personally don't like endings like that, cuz who knows if I will ever get to read what's coming next?? Left me hanging! so the verse felt unfinished. Other than that everything was on point.

Quotes:

The women are herded inside, disgracefully and shamefully,
Their jaundiced yellow skin contrasts the labs grey masonry.

All through the war he never lost sight of his overall goal,
To create life from a sterile woman and take over God's role,

Adonis - Another creepy verse, which took me aback once i realized the origin of the baby, cuz the beginning was a really lovely poetic and in media res way to bring birth out there in rap form. Your verse has so many really creative images and metaphors, that was my fav part about it, even though I just wanted to see more angst on the part of this orphan boy, his whole "heart-of-gold" attitude didn't seem real to me but maybe Im just too much of a pessimist. a few flaws here and there but overall another spectacular verse.

Quotes:


My tongue's a rope – The noose gropes deformities,

A longer leg, its cool – My boot has sole,
Hair of gold – A platinum white Anglo,
Seen as a halo. No, I'm not an angel,

I trudged through a cervix outlined in chalk Wow

Vote - Zygote, I'm a little let down by both verses this week, both were competent but I felt that this being a contender match I would see flames, overall though two great verses so I went with the one I was feeling the most.