What a clash. Two titans tangling horns, ready for blood spill. Lol jk good battle guys.
Mmlp; this was perfunctory. Nothing really here. The over sized in shape line didn't have any bearing on your concept? Drive slow as a metaphor for slowing down your life could've worked but this was full of platitudes, plain wording, and simplistic rhymes. Not bad, per se, but just there.
Split; good verse. This was about as strong a 10 line verse I can think of and honestly helped me in picturing mine. This said a lot in a short space without being dense. The rhyming was fluid like always. Very well worded. If you keep this level of quality up you'll be a real threat this tournament.
v/ split
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