half empty, underscore
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mixed lines
21, some of your concepts just didn't completely connect. You had the idea, but just barely missed on most of them. Work on making everything in your verse relevant to the rest of it. Nam came pretty nice. Idk if I had ever seen a battle from nam that wasn't in archives, so it's nice to read a current verse. I am surprised that you used a Raid line. although you prolly didn't bring flamethrowers to this meeting, considering that you didn't know who 21 was. I think namix got this pretty easily, stay up tho 21.
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Originally Posted by takem2school
Me vs you only if that’s what it takes.
Battle to the death
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like a woolah what it do to one’s medulla oblongata- revenge of Montezuma on a blotter
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