This was pretty close tbh, for different reasons. so i broke it down:
Quote:
Originally Posted by Sharp Nine
Oversized bars ontop a one another - visually thats tha worst shit dude
bad enough its all over fb, then I come here n have to see it in ya verses too
--aight
Dom fell off looooong ago, we won't see this cat win
I got here with an Utmost showing every week - hes here cuz that didn't happen
-- cool 'nuff
EVERYTHING you writes played as fuck. Everytime theyre quoted makes me mad
Ur bars don't just ring a bell... theyre older than the wheelchair guy from breaking bad
-- concept was great, but wording undermined it here... 'bars dont just ring a bell' sounds like, 'they're not only ringing bells, they're enshrined with the whistles on 'em too' -- like it'll be soo remembered. but i see what you were going for clearly... you tried to combine two competing concepts though, with 'they dont ring a bell' and the metaphor for someone who would do more than ring a bell... again, great concept, just mind the wording because this line coulda been a banger
Climbings my thing, I'm the face of doin text well
I change the rankings weekly w/ my Word... you just do it w/ your Excel
--pretty common flip bro, would have had to be way more in-depth complexity-wise and a bit more 'raw' delivery wise (e.g. how your opponent will never Excel to incorporate the word and excel wordplay and then make it like even behind me in the ranking Powerpoints - for the added complexity, that woulda been ill - but this flip didnt have enough behind it this time bro).
Doms grateful for his friends votin his way, guy's stuck on that reliant tip
So if he pulls a victory here, it wont be the only time we see NATO win thanks to alliances
--cool 'nuf
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Dominate
Been riding dicks a minute here, & ur only rep’s as a fucktard clown kid
If u Carved Out a name for urself it’s above “& Namix 4eva” w/ a love heart round it
--cool 'nuf
I saw u wet urself when he spoke to you – you were delighted to have him supervise
He gave u the theory in Cross Training... I’ll give u the practical of How To Be Crucified
--wouldn't have expected you to see it, but tried to get in front of this one in an OM since great minds think a like sir. good thought, im sure most will like it, just didn't resonate for me for obvious reasons
Sn00p’s rushing, but next week’s champ match won’t be Knuck and u..
I’ll be against K Nine... you’ll be hugging ur dog-ugly girlfriend while she comforts you
--cool 'nuff
She a ancient dame w/ ungodly looks, that bitch’s Hair gives the game away
My girl could inspire Erotic Books... your girl is 50 with Shades of Grey
--lol
& that Newb tourney you’re in? I predict you’ll get seared & scorched dude
Even IF u make BoreDom a son ... ur mother did THAT 20 years before you
--cool 'nuff, solid concept, coulda made that 'boredom a son' sound a bit more fluid, but thats one of those i could see playing with for a minute and just saying eff it this should get the point across, so i feel it
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both were solid reads but pretty close match for different reasons. I think Sharp had a couple concepts that were great, but the delivery of them just didnt help them reach their potential. I think Dominate had a pretty consistent verse throughout.
this was a close match, pretty consistent verses which for me came down to their haymakers, and that was sharp's breaking bad line vs. 50 shades of grey... the breaking bad one would have edged it out if the wording was polished, but the 50 shades of grey line was one of the funnier lines in the match i'd say.
v-Dominate
it was a pretty even match, with Sharp having been a bar pr so shy from keeping up with Dominate's consistency. good shit fellas.