i like reading your shit.
some parts were better than others. the beginning rhyme scheme was really good
Ex is known for his heart rippin'
from the victims he targets
like how he pulled out yours thru that large frickin
ditch in your carcass
I'm an overly hard hitter
better hope you is armed wit it
go 'head and picture the carnage as a totally fucked image
stripped of all charcoal flesh
disfigured in darkness,
a harmless limp figure with no ligament cartilage left
in a position that's far from best
is your predicament nigga
I'm a lyrical architect,
creatin' miracles bigger
than any in the biblical era
The problem you and I both have i think, is that we don't really say much. i mean if u really read this you didn't say anything.. i have that problem too with my "bragging shit". that's why i try to bring just more mundane real shit now lol.. like pof fat chicks.. drinking beer. being hungover.. and commenting on my own writing while im doing it.. while im eating food etc. lol. or mimicking other ppls styles or making fun of it. i've always thought u would be dope on a topical. something u cared about though.. not some half assed emo feeling shit but something real to u. i'de love to see it
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