[IamBenT]

Good, eye-opening and fun battle!

C.d.m. - PREACH! Haha on the real tip, everyone needs more of this kind of information, and especially action steps to take on spreading the word and unplugging from this beastly wicked system. In terms of your verse, I loved the content and felt the importance of what you were coming out with, it reminded me of some early hip hop, and how that might be flowed out, so it was a fun read as well, just the long bars really killed me when it came to reading this.

quotes:

The FED bought us, but ignorance is bliss
Swing and a miss, how they cant fathom this
The whole paper economy is a lie (so true) more on this would have been great, cuz its so real and relevant

Since the U.S. is a subsidiary of this abomination
It can only have the powers of its’ owner’s approximation

Ink - wow, this is what I am used to seeing from the RM poet laureate lol on the real, great imagery, interesting wordplay and meta4s!!! even, with a scheme that was dope 90% or so throughout, with very few places where I would personally have liked to see some revising/rewording for a clearer read. The end was great, and the work really rewards those who do more than a cursory first read, but actually go back and look closer at the more intricately worded sections and details that give us that fascinating picture of Fate.

quotes:

Even when the nicety of charity is cruelty clothed in wool
I'm the bullseye at the center of every curse and gift
Tearing rifts or shifting halves of hearts around until they fit off the meat rack

Devoid of sins and evil whims, but now he's Job with boils for skin
A dove's outside the cage she lived, she'll never have to sing again
And in her place, it must be him, that wears the collar and the chain like the allusion

Vote- Ink for a more interesting verse to me.