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Old 08-27-2014, 10:45 PM   #27
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Originally Posted by theMuzzl3 View Post
Thanks for the advice.

By "one verse", I assume you're meaning not a complete piece.

I'll definitely take a break for up to a week on posting any rhymes/poetry.

And, thanks for pointing me towards the cypher section.

I was kind of hoping to have my own thread where I post my own pieces or verses (complete or not) and get advice on how it can be improved & whatnot. I'll keep it to a minimum and keep my shit in my text files & revise them & stuff before posting new shit.


BTW, your flaming comments were hilarious!
It can be a complete piece but try to look at the size of other people's submissions here to get an idea of what reasonable lengths you should think about. In reality, if you desire to post 300 bars, go for it. But good luck finding anyone who'll read it. If you break up those 300 bars into 15 pieces, twenty bars each that'd be preferred conduct.

Just my opinion, have fun!
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