[IamBenT]

Ha nice battle!

Vinzr- Interesting, you had a few thematic elements that you shared in each part of the verse ie the angels, at first they are angels of misery, then angels of Ecstasy. I thought you could have developed it more and given us a "face" to this person going from misery to happiness to taking drugs. Each word was elaborated on, which was an interesting take on the topic, but I felt you could have done a better job of tying everything together, maybe in an end verse or with notes in between the verses.

Quotes:

Controlling my own thoughts as my feelings glide around
Soft, fragile and swift like feathers as they ride the sound beautiful imagery here

Don’t ever let me go back to the place - this drug is my remedy
Perhaps there really are such things as angels and this is what they sent to me…interesting way to end, really caught my attention

Que - is it Cue or the spanish Ke? Let a brotha know. In any case, fascinating verse, your use of exclamation points was unparalleled!!! lol Good flow, great descriptive details, the fun of writing this really came through, and the concept is a pretty creative one, i like the use of personification and found it interesting that both the forces of Misery and the forces of Happiness found Ecstasy in the battle, and both armies praised the same Gods of Morgah lol Hilarious. Good message and a good verse, even if for me the Medieval trope is getting a bit played out.

Quotes:

Great Gods of Morgah!! My spear can't wait to explore a Vest! wording was just too funny, as you were keeping that rhyme scheme going lol

The ones that bark as if wolves were released to ravage
When Good meets the savage its too much for the meek to manage!fantastic multis here

To die for happiness is an honor....to kill for enlightenment is an order
To spread elation is our mantra.....we fight for the Gods of Morgah! cool story, bro

Vote - Que