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Vulgar · 08-27-2014, 07:08 PM

Good stuff, the middle had strong spirit in it, esp. with the dense internal rhyming. Not too dense, but just right enough to make it easily readable.

08-27-2014, 07:08 PM	#2
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	Good stuff, the middle had strong spirit in it, esp. with the dense internal rhyming. Not too dense, but just right enough to make it easily readable.