Fascinating battle.
Vulgar - Dope, the flows were nice, the vocab is interstellar lol and the concept of aliens coming back to be appalled at how we fucked up, it's been done before but i really liked your creative imagery on it, a little more development on the race itself, and the fact that you kinda left out Slavery bothered me lol but that's nitpicking. The message came in strong and you really explored the topic in a powerful and interesting way, plus the ironic ending made me laugh in a sad way. Great verse.
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Originally Posted by Vulgar
Cruelty is no alien concept.
The alien race crowed so loud that their tracheas swelled, great image here
Henceforth, it was a nightmare to compare this dreadful species to their sapient selves
For these “people” outer life was misunderstood,
their most prided authors were lame in tongue - many were strange, debunked
War of the Worlds, giant squids, flying saucers and laser guns? so funny and dope
Meanwhile, back on their home planet, “Ancient Humans” was about to debut great end
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Witty - Mad potential here, just too short to get it done this week. It almost seemed like the start of two disparate verses and I would really like to see how you were going to bridge the gap here, as it may have led to a really interesting exploration on beauty being destroyed by our penchant for cruelty, but i digress. Kind of a Watcher vibe too, from the Marvel comics lol. The flow was strong to this, as I am beginning to expect from a Witty verse, and the imagery was nice too.
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Vulgar