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Old 08-27-2014, 03:32 AM   #12
jilti
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Gamble..

Precision is swell, aim perfected cave ya chest in...
Basic segment of rage with weapons.................. displayed on this slain contestant.
Angry message...
I'm a problem.. He ain't getting no fire started, with his endeavor
Now it's time..
I show 'Camp Out of his mind'.. next time try 'visioning rubbing two sticks together'.
Maybe that's what's better for this dick to b clever... I bring this guy danger
......................................... I give this fucking peasant sudden death like a tie breaker.
Trust me for a second... This is something u mustn't get in..
Break his damn leg............ I'm Giving Campaign.... like he was Running for Election.


Campbell..

blood pumps through my cryo'd heart, son my typos might go hard
got my stripes twice by snatching the life of pi from that tigers jaws
you a vet on the netcee wave? lets see, jet ski race with tritons drawn
i'll end lyfe at the finish line, thats a dead sea grave in poseidons lawn
visually, the chemistry in my ability to enter keys is too hype for words
literally, lyfez blue sky was nice an calm til walter white met heisenberg
we in the dungeon wit double dragons, gambling trouble, ya dice is short
i brought hammer and spike to war, bludgeoned action, you'll die for sure


Soooo.. i have it 4 bars a piece, 1 miss by both. cool metaphors/nameplays in Gambles verse. while Camp dropped a nearly flawless verse. One of the better swag & flow verses ive read. opener and closer were fire

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