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Old 04-01-2013, 01:17 AM   #9
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Vulgar

I really like your vocab; Some rare ass words lol

auroraboreal
Excommunicated
palpitate
Maharashtr
perennial

Your storytelling was meaningful and actually read like a story which lacks in the forum at times, from my own hand aswell. I wish you had more abstract and deep meanings rather then summing everything up into 1 deep meaning; That was my only "real" problem with the piece.


Witty

Yo man, potential for the piece was fucking buzzin. Too be honest im dissapointed, I really hoped for atleast a short read rather an incomplete one. After Channel 247 though I was losing interest so I can see the wall thing you mentioned; Probably woulda got it if you backspaced 3 bars.

Looking forward to your return.


V/Vulgar

Shit was doper all around but Witty has a reasonable defence.

Nice fucking artwork Vulgar!
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