thanks for everyones view and feed.
yo malachi, i just read this. you did have some nice lines
but just keep working on your style. the structure was off
IMO. try writing line for line in a 1-2 style. i'm open for more
collabs or even if you need or want help, im here bro. keep
working and you'll find your niche.
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get high. write rhymes.
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