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Old 08-26-2014, 11:15 AM   #6
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I've got trap winning too here. Good verse for how short it was, really developed though I don't think Split fully got the concept behind trap's piece here. Lol. No idea where the spunky girl thought came from, he must have been living under a rock this month.

Lines like this from Adonis were entirely too many syllables long, and against someone with crisper wording and shorter lines, it really does make every blemish all the more evident:

"Blue collars aren't action packed so the movie's adjusted, embellished facts."

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