KnowP: The setup was terrible. The punchline was fine, but I don't like generic lines in 1-2 punch leagues. All you have to do is come up with one line about a guy. Make it at least a nameplay if not a personal.
jilti: This was a very cleanly executed generic punch. So the same problem exists, but you handled yourself better.
Vote: jilti
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