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Certain · 08-26-2014, 01:44 AM

BROKE LESNAR: That wordplay was forced as hell. The wording was really good here. But you could have done more with an "i.e. D" line if you really wanted to go that route, particularly since Destroyer starts with a D.

Destroyer: This was pretty mediocre, too. The wording was off, and the "broke" nameplay was way too simple and direct.

The weird thing is both of you have written pretty well lately. I guess you just don't care much about this match, even if it's one bar. I'm going to vote for line I liked more and not feel good about this battle as a whole, particularly as a title match.

Vote: BROKE LESNAR

08-26-2014, 01:44 AM	#8
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	BROKE LESNAR: That wordplay was forced as hell. The wording was really good here. But you could have done more with an "i.e. D" line if you really wanted to go that route, particularly since Destroyer starts with a D. Destroyer: This was pretty mediocre, too. The wording was off, and the "broke" nameplay was way too simple and direct. The weird thing is both of you have written pretty well lately. I guess you just don't care much about this match, even if it's one bar. I'm going to vote for line I liked more and not feel good about this battle as a whole, particularly as a title match. Vote: BROKE LESNAR __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.