Blanco Bishop: It's weird that you used an obsolete definition of malignant for the wordplay. These days, malignant pretty much only is used to mean cancerous. I guess it worked, but that was awkward.
Malachi: The concept was OK, I guess. But the wording was off. As with Blanco Bishop's line (and many text rap punches), I can be obnoxious and point out a major flaw: Waving a gun is not a good thing. But mostly, you should have flipped the wording.
Vote: Blanco Bishop
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