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Originally Posted by pharaohsarmy52
alright but seriously Muzzle,
daily rhymes are one thing. but let's keep in mind that (and you yourself know this) FB and tumblr are certainly appropriate for some of them. the "knick-knacks", if you will.
now based on what appears to be some quick, straightforward rhyming on your part, i can tell that you do in fact have some talents and ability. please try to focus in and hone it. then post the focused/honed (probably not daily), and you will get responses.
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Thank you for the advice. I do have a list of poetry that I did years ago, that (some of) is actually pretty good. In those posts I was basically trying to free flow; but I will definitely minimize it to a smaller, more specific and significant list of words. I really don't know how to rap.... I just had stupid shit in my head and tried to rhyme. I got music to write, so maybe some of the stuff I put together in lyrics will go into that.