Split is a car geek and you gave him the topic drive slow?
Like MMLP didn't have a bigger barrier to jump over.
MMLP, simple and direct verse. Some of the verbiage needs to be redone. To be honest, this read like a keystyle or rough draft. I enjoyed the message.
Split, chock full of metas and entandres, which I enjoy. Well written and still succinct.
Vote, Split.
PS: Split, there was no spunky girl in my verse, even if it was alluded that way. Thanks for reading it and voting though...both of you.
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triplet syllables for minimal criminals.
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