I got you dog...
disfigured in darkness,
a harmless limp figure with no ligament cartilage left
-Damn
crossed off, over and nailed
durin' a log on from Ex
where the dopest prevails when the complete opposites met.
-thatz a nice ender fa' sho'
overall thiz was pretty solid...thought lost a lil' steam in the middle..an tha structure was a lil' different...actually had to re-read a few of the linez in order to pick up how it was set up to flow...
But content is there...diggin' the style...Can tell you more of tha battle type...at least thatz wha' I picked up
Keep em' comin'
HoLLa
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