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due to my Day-by-Day Announcements i'm Basically just a Play By Play Announcer..
it's pretty swell.. i think i do it pretty well..
i think i should start campaigning for City Hall..
or at the Very Least.. start In'erviewing them All..
you-see i've Started Wrong.. i've Started a Song..
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cool, this part was the highlight for me.
I don't like your structure, I struggled through reading this. The mad uneven lines and the random capitalization and punctuation left me a lil at a loss. The rhymes were all over for me, but there were bits and pieces I enjoyed. Slim it down a bit haha.
keep keyin brah