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Originally Posted by Mr. J
push me off the beach and watch me greet the strength of Poseidon
my illiterate rising to immortality in the shells I'm hiding
make an ill remark twice, find your head in a vice a la Joe Pesci
heavy is the heart that holds that fault the crown is so heavy
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DOPE. last line was weird, but still, dope.
love how you scheme your stuff, man. and the imagery/ concepts were on point here. thought the fates/oracle/ matrix progression was cool, you really kept it moving & didn't dwell too long on anything at all. Always enjoyed how rapidfire your writing was.
keep keyin Q