Just spreading the trending of your thread
I figured I'd just make a new thread, because I plan on posting/working on lyrics or rhymes (or poetry) daily, and facebook & tulblr became dumb places to post em. I heard once you post something here, you own it. Is that true?
I want responses to all my posted lyrics/poems; whether they be editing & making things flow better musically, or replies to what I post.
First post (wrote it tonight) goes like this:
Came to
a reason to be with you, hoe;
stickin like rubber and glue…
bouncin and trouncin;
and, announcing the flow:
to those that had no clue
that its a fun show…
the one that our crew:
might be pooin while we do.
Its all a dope ride.
We all subside
in the same tide
that may be hitten
the side of the guide
that you eyed:
and cried to
to rescue you.
I hope you ain't sittin
fo dat fat splat
of what I spat
as the universe:
on your door mat.
Just say a verse;
but don't rehearse.
Copywrite isn't copyright blah blah blah you suck at naming dates and times
~theMuzzl3
Last edited by theMuzzl3; 08-25-2014 at 04:44 AM.
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