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CopyPat · 08-24-2014, 10:12 PM

yoo.
not bad, decent. to be honest though i thought you're other tracks were better. to me you never quite sounded comfortable on this beat, like u were really straining to ride it properly. i think u could write your bars to better fit the beat (longer or shorter) rather than speeding up or slowing down your delivery, know what i mean??. and its not much. its a matter of literally a word taken away here, or another there. in some cases maybe even just a syllable. it just sounded like you were always trying to keep up with it rather than just ride over it. 2nd guy sounded alot more smooth over it to me. don't get me wrong it certainly wasn't horrible but i have heard u with better. the beat itself was ok i thought. not real stand out, but i typically like more upbeat instrumentals and this was purposely a darker feel so i'll have some bias there. it was just a tad boring to me

anyways you're miles ahead of alot of dudes on this site audio wise, myself included , so i definitely respect what your doing so keep it up, just trying to give you real feed that i hope might help you. i will expect the same hopefully once i start recording a bit. THX

08-24-2014, 10:12 PM	#2
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	yoo. not bad, decent. to be honest though i thought you're other tracks were better. to me you never quite sounded comfortable on this beat, like u were really straining to ride it properly. i think u could write your bars to better fit the beat (longer or shorter) rather than speeding up or slowing down your delivery, know what i mean??. and its not much. its a matter of literally a word taken away here, or another there. in some cases maybe even just a syllable. it just sounded like you were always trying to keep up with it rather than just ride over it. 2nd guy sounded alot more smooth over it to me. don't get me wrong it certainly wasn't horrible but i have heard u with better. the beat itself was ok i thought. not real stand out, but i typically like more upbeat instrumentals and this was purposely a darker feel so i'll have some bias there. it was just a tad boring to me anyways you're miles ahead of alot of dudes on this site audio wise, myself included , so i definitely respect what your doing so keep it up, just trying to give you real feed that i hope might help you. i will expect the same hopefully once i start recording a bit. THX __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.