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Old 08-24-2014, 09:47 PM   #5
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2 favorite parts
the grenade line
and
blind to what the face of my father hid
^^^ that ones crazy

dope rhyme scheme...this was all nice...nothin' to critique you know what ya doin' an you doin' it well...

good writer right here

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