I liked this as a creative process verse - I wasn't really hooked by the closer, which appears to be pretty important in terms of how you structured it... I was more grabbed by the shared experience of writing, posting, voting, etc. Your flow is exceptionally refined and one of the things that makes you elite. The rhymes here, like other verses I've read from you, feel like a tornado turning over on itself again and again... tangling you up along the way. My one issue was the use of larger words in the middle that really jerked up the flow:
Quote:
dMy many creations are staples of this
regularly taken and tailored to fit.
Shaped and then scripted in cautionary tales
to paint you a picture as boredom prevails.
I draw from them daily, caricaturing my friends,
as all of their failings have brought me success.
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'regularly', 'cautionary', and 'caricaturing' all detract from the larger piece because they throw the flow off.
That's my one piece of criticism. Overall, very dope.