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Pop in a cork to clog my heart from bleeding out.
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this is what im talkin' bout. so why not use the set up line
above it and use a twist on wine bottles or champagne bottles
to create a killer bar.
like how champagne blasts open when u take the cork out..
so ur hearts a champagne bottle?
okay, so u shake the bottle. ur shaken up...when?
celebrate my pain. bubbly smiles shake me up...
pop a cork in my heart, & bleed out when they "***********"
seee what im sayin man ur lines are all 1 shot wonders
but to truly be a "netcee" u have to set ur lines up and give them the 1-2.
i notice that in most of ur verses. maybe its laziness or its
hard for you but imo thats how u can improve cause u have
cool ass ideas..
idk man, just trying to keep it real