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Originally Posted by Scripter
LMFAO sweet!!!!
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Who've you defeated? Every HoF i've versed was beaten.
I'm God so don't Question who 'I Am, THAT I Am' is Alpha Omega, heathen
this was bad tbh. I get the reference, but other than the god/I am that I am/alpha omega connection it isn't a punch, or even a sensible play, just loose associations crammed into a single line
Beginners vs IHH Legends. Vets decide & vote the winner
Bey/Kin Rapped around this Fresh Meat & cooked'em raw like Diodes dinner
this was a solid hit, idk who kin is but I don't need to in order to understand the line
Beyond & I formed a phalanx. Impregnable styled rhymes
Netcees Read Coats Formation... & their murder in a single file line
honestly, this was significantly better than the red coats line in our battle, which was worded horrifically.
If Muskets flare I'm never scared & charge with Bayonets
I've got a Gun Attachment, You're attached to Neigh's display of text
the personal is lost on me tbh, I wasn't aware Certain was attached to neighbor's text game. if true, it's a pretty decent line
Stand in range, cannons aimed - fifty 40 pounders shift
Para Lies? You weren't crushed & dull boy properly operated the forklift
wording fucked this up on the "you weren't crushed" part. I think you meant to say "you were crushed" (by the fifty 40 pounders) and then contrast it with the dull boy bit. good concept though
I fucking hate Topicalists 99% of you are trolls & nerdy
My favorite Coat Tale is where you rode each others & Exited the Tourney
lol this was dope
meh
Get Peaced before the first round when the hands be fired
got everyone laughing if you throw One like Bigg K versus Danny Myers
haven't watched the battle yet, now I kinda want to
Ironic 10 Guns Holstered if you try to attack & murder me
You got Para Medics, when they left with YOUR body strapped, to a gurney
predictable the way you worded it
We run blocks, do dirt & buck shots at the meanest crews
You are all imposters faking that walk of life & wear those Adidas shoes
someone in the tag tourney had a better adidas shoes line than this, which makes this a little weak from my perspective but still a decent line I guess
Pistol whips'll slit ya throat then watch'em bleed & suffer
Vocal cord between these two cans like each hand tryna talk to each other
also dope
overall, a solid compilation of ideas that were good enough to write somewhere, though probably not good enough to be in a formal battle. two dope lines in here though