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Old 08-20-2014, 02:39 AM   #3
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As we adapt and replace with more technology
the practical brain becomes a sought commodity.
This course we follow in leads to divide
& forms the origin of a sub-species that thrives.
Its people unlike their genetic relatives
more feeble in size and less intelligent.
They’re separate entities with inhuman physiques,
- inept degenerates who’ll do as we please.
Our beautiful-geniuses keep the ugly-stupid at bay
view them as meek and use them as slaves.
Mere tools of their trade to unearth, barter and sell
in a truth that’s as strange as the works of Dali himself…

was all dope. the beginning that setup the end was good but the very end was very well done. I like the topic a lot. It is weird to think that we may degenerate at some time as a species some day but looking at something like sports how athletes have grown exponentially due to science It's hard for me to think it will ever reach that point. I think somehow there will always be a balance. Good piece makes you think and you gave a great perspective. Nice job.
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