first of all let me say, this was a nice s&f battle here.
so i copied & pasted both verses, then deleted what i deemed as filler. this is the final result..
Bishop..
My verses read like movie scripts. No slackin when the pen' s moving quick. I do my duty right.
Plus i do the booty right. Smoothly satisfy the Nina Hartley type from Boogie Nights.
U couldn't find more heart in a warrior's chest. A coroner's best friend when i order your death bed...after i slaughter your flesh.
Bustin choppers n teks at imposters who test this monster of text. A mobster exec,
I'm cranberry n Goose sippin..get buried if u slippin..shots vary from two weapons when my ire's summoned.
Hired gunmen will retire ur frontin or set fire to your entire apartment 'till it expires to nothin.
When i come through..dippin in the crimson SS...Imma run through...a few chickens, cuz I'm fixin to dip my tip in some wet wet.
So run dude..I'm not kiddin, kid its your best bet..I'm Sun Szu...inna fitted, siftin' through texts'best.
Yes...
I study the art diligently. Confined in a bunker my mind ponders plunder that'll tear u apart intelligently.
We're miles apart mentally. Yours plateaus off where mine begins to form thoughts n the holy ghost starts entering me.
Rendering enemies hopeless. U hacks'll get whacked to a bloody pulp. I dunno what u trying to fucking pull
but I'm ultra gully fool. Plus, sonny's swolle. U scummy wolves'll drop in a heap on your bloody wool.
Gullible rats get clapped with promptness. Three pratts from the arm will detach your noggin.
These raps r astronomic. Astronaut shit. Squeeze so many rhymes in space n time so many times...ud swear i'm Martian.
Blanco dope multis throughout, flow was on point. Like to see less guntalk and more swag but if thats ur style thats ur style. the nina hartley/boogie nights, apartment, and holy ghosts entering me lines were fire.
Camp Bell..
its no stress to flex with extra extreme since you tested my steez
a veteran weaponry team stepping from netcees to sesame street
blanco soft but swears he lost fucks...nah, my doctrine is mayhem
i bet this square can barely draw blood, a phlebotomist in training
i'm more unbreakable than david dunn and inspired by his train wreck
your an accident waiting to happen, i paid elijah price for ya grave debt.
Camp ur first four lines didnt quite match up rhyme wise. idk if a line was misplaced or something, but i edited down to my favorite lines anyways. the best was the draw blood/phlebotomist line.
Vote-Bishop
Last edited by jilti; 08-19-2014 at 02:41 PM.
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