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nemean: verse was alll over the place. opener was homoerotic
seems every couplet except the bags one was nonsensical tbh
I know ive been shadow fucking with u lately...bur this verse is the reason why
Judoboy got heat?
thefuck
90 percent of this had me like wtf?
closers setup was a glaring example
nail in the coughin..so ur sayin she broke a nail whilst forcing herself to vomit? ok..as retarded as that sounds..wat does that have to do with the punch. ...(something to work on)
n the punch was blahworthy..n yes ive heard the fat lady sings thing..the way u executed it was fucking eh tho
keep battling though. youll get better with time
jilti.
opener..passable but eh
mean streak is ok
drop ne was pretty good
n sync decent
not feeling closer
decent outing
u knew ud take this easy so no harm no foul
v,/jilti
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Last edited by El Muffin; 08-18-2014 at 06:29 AM.
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