Richie valenz had a good-ish verse with an argument of real life versus cinema escapism and I felt like it could have gone deeper? Yea. The end line was good but more shoulda led up to the big shebang for more effective volume and what not. I liked the rhyming though ^.^
Stoned template pirate had a great idea and messed it up and made it all short and stuff and had me disappointed at the size :( but I enjoyed the bits you had though! I wish there was more to feast on because I love mythology and vikings and blood and stuff. But you were too short. So....
Dicks sporting goods wins on account of temp plates not having it all together ^.^
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