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Richard Schwartz · 08-17-2014, 11:10 PM

Purple Puke is a good dude for setting the limit at 10 lines to give Piiz a chance to get a verse in. Piiz is a good dude for actually answering the bell and not taking the easy way out and straight no-showing. @Purple Puke and @Piiz are good guys.

Now that that's outta the way.

Pukey Pete - your verse was pretty eloquently put. I really liked the way it was worded - unfortunately, you weren't able to get very far with it, so it was basically just a 10 line description of defeat. For what you were able to do with that little space, I liked the scheme and the word choice. I think it was decent.

Piiz, you also had some nice schemes - it was good upon further reading, but I couldn't get around that it just felt like it was keystyled. It felt like you wanted to do more and just couldn't and that pervaded your bars. Slick offering based on the timing though.

Like I said, you're both great guys - and both verses left me wanting more from both of you. In the end, I just feel Purple Puke had a more focused offering. Kudos to both.

08-17-2014, 11:10 PM	#9
Richard Schwartz Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 65 Rep Power: 3707157	Purple Puke is a good dude for setting the limit at 10 lines to give Piiz a chance to get a verse in. Piiz is a good dude for actually answering the bell and not taking the easy way out and straight no-showing. @Purple Puke and @Piiz are good guys. Now that that's outta the way. Pukey Pete - your verse was pretty eloquently put. I really liked the way it was worded - unfortunately, you weren't able to get very far with it, so it was basically just a 10 line description of defeat. For what you were able to do with that little space, I liked the scheme and the word choice. I think it was decent. Piiz, you also had some nice schemes - it was good upon further reading, but I couldn't get around that it just felt like it was keystyled. It felt like you wanted to do more and just couldn't and that pervaded your bars. Slick offering based on the timing though. Like I said, you're both great guys - and both verses left me wanting more from both of you. In the end, I just feel Purple Puke had a more focused offering. Kudos to both.