Seymour: This was good, but first off let me start by saying what bothered me about this. "vitreous hue" <<<fucking hated that. After I read that I just assumed I would hate this whole piece, but I was wrong and it got back in my good graces almost immediately. Funny in parts, actually right after vitreous hue was the funniest line to me. All in all, I liked it, except for vitreous fucking hue.
Sui Mi: You like your opponent had two words that irritated the fuck out of me, "boyishly awesome." Also just like your opponent you came back swinging afterwards. I'll say that the rhymes in this were very impressive, especially the pageants section. That made me like this verse much more because to me it was a very easy read. Nice work.
V/Seymour
Good battle.
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