Dick Schwartz: I liked this. Each line was paced perfectly and there were really no hiccups in the flow at all. The story was real, but it was told in a funny way. I dig that. People are stupid and love watching 60 year old men play pretend bad ass. It's sad. Back to this piece in particular, I really couldn't find anything bad to say about it. I enjoyed it forrealz.
Template: I could never really get into this. Your piece didn't keep me as engaged as Dick's did (no homo). It just seemed like a very rushed story, like you had something more in mind but halfway through it you said fuck it and dropped what you had. There was nothing particularly wrong with the writing, but there was nothing particularly great in my opinion either.
V/Dick
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