[Adonis]

I liked Richards approach. Well it didn't fit the topic precisely, it did in a sense. When you add to the fact that the rhyme scheme was just butter and the concept actually had depth...very enjoyable verse. The fluidity gave the read a fast paced action drama in my mind. I liked the points on certain subject matter regarding other movies. Overall I literally have nothing bad to say about this. It might have started a bit stale, but as I said, the subject matter was not just about nothing.


Template to had a good verse. Not as fluid as Richard, and shorter given his concept. The brevity nearly ruined it for me. You could have made this an epic battle of beast verse man, and instead ended as soon as you began.



Voting Richard

Overall had the better verse