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Old 08-17-2014, 08:40 PM   #7
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This was very short. To commence my breakdown I will state that Piiz verse was lacking a coherent overarching coalesce. While some lines were more thought provoking than others, it still did not add up to a verse that will take hold of the reader, and make his brain spasm in neurological excitement. Reading other's commentary I see that you rushed it. This explains the sense of it almost appearing as a freestyle of sort, a quick keystyle.

Purple's was written more with the intentional format of the stylistic normalcy of rap. Nothing really felt completely awe astonishing either. In many occasions it was run-of-the-mill. However the verse was crafted with more special care. If I give a comparison it is as if blacksmith created a well sturdy sword. However, this sword is still prone to rust because the black smith did not collect the best material, and did not sweat blood and tears in intention of creating something of the like of Masamune, or an Excalibur like weapon.

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