Netcees - View Single Post - Camp Bell vs. YDK

El Muffin · 08-16-2014, 01:36 PM

ok ..not really feeling either entry this time

ive seen both competitors with better shit

ydks had potential for humor..I like that u tied in the ringing bell with the hunchback of notre dame shit..cuz thats relevant..my only gripe is the flow /transition from setup to punch..syllables didnt match..results are a choppy line.

camp bell..urs was executed cleaner but unfortunately im totally unfamiliar with the reference..I googled angry fan but as I expected..it was entirely too vague..hopefully ppl will come in here n see ur line for what it really is.

apologies

that being said I have to give ydk the edge in this

ydk

08-16-2014, 01:36 PM	#6
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,690 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230535	ok ..not really feeling either entry this time ive seen both competitors with better shit ydks had potential for humor..I like that u tied in the ringing bell with the hunchback of notre dame shit..cuz thats relevant..my only gripe is the flow /transition from setup to punch..syllables didnt match..results are a choppy line. camp bell..urs was executed cleaner but unfortunately im totally unfamiliar with the reference..I googled angry fan but as I expected..it was entirely too vague..hopefully ppl will come in here n see ur line for what it really is. apologies that being said I have to give ydk the edge in this ydk __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople Last edited by El Muffin; 08-17-2014 at 03:50 AM.