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Old 08-14-2014, 10:57 PM   #12
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Fuckin Pop up just destroyed my vote


Kin - Your cadence is dope. The way you used your chorus, in particular topic, to rip your counter parts was witty. The way you speed up and slow down all while a continous match with the beat might be undervalued, but I caught that shit. I don't know how I feel about the battle shit, but I will admitt this track was dope and you killed it for it was.

BX - I enjoy your gritty style. You know who you are. I loved the fact you said "Fuck syllables and word play", I am gutter to death. I enjoy that shit, and the fact you put you out there makes it even better. But you had so many gutter rhymes...yet opened with how you are a proud father and proud of your father??? Kind of contradicts??? All grime aside though, as you admitt, lyrically you just don't have it. "Keep dreaming my inner demon trapped, serving life sentence. Only thing inside my body living is brain..I'm transcendent". Lyrically not there, but the style for what is, is thoroughly enjoyable by me.


Ali - I liked the fact that you replied to KIN's diss track. Also, aside from quality, I appreciate the rhyme scheme you went with. The lyrical talent is there, but the cadence is so far off that it kills the listenability. Aside from that, you have talent. But that's a huge thing to overlook. Overall, solid verse if the quality and flow were there.



Voting BX

He spit that raw for me, Kin probably had the better track in all honesty, but for some reason unknown to even me, I enjoyed BX more.
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