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Old 08-14-2014, 08:36 PM   #7
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Archives of the Ancients: I wince every time someone spells "segue" like the automated scooter product. The Hush eyebrows line was funny enough, but you're not facing Hush. The best lines in this read sort of like bad lines from a zygote battle rap. There were very few personals, though admittedly neither of these guys is that personable around the site. The opener might have been the best line of a bland verse.

Name Pending: "Al Murda" might not be a bad choice, if you guys do in fact want a name. This verse was good enough to win pretty clearly. I liked the fluidity of the Dos Equis line and the wordplay of the arcade line. The treats line might have worked better with "bitch" instead of "dime" in the setup. The "Oh Vul" line was probably the best of the battle. As predicted, your styles work well together (unless this was all murda sho).

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