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Old 08-14-2014, 08:24 PM   #10
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Double K: I didn't like any of these lines. Maybe the Kevin Durant line had some potential. I don't know. Nothing stood out. It read very much like a formulaic text rap battle verse, except that the punches were boring and generic despite facing two of the biggest personalities on this site.

Nik Bags: On the flipside, everything in this verse also read like a formulaic text rap battle verse, but almost every line was at least decent. Clearly, ill nik-A is much better than this showing. I don't know what I'd call the standouts. The prey and KKK lines were solid enough to take this. You did the job.

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