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Old 08-14-2014, 08:14 PM   #18
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I can't even imagine, then, what it takes to make you laugh. Template's verse was great, the best of the round. Richard Schwartz's verse was probably an A- or B+.


I'm not saying that they aren't humorous on a small level. But reading so many lines of on Lance Bass or How someone has cancer...hahaha, gets stale by, say the third stanza or 20 lines in.

And actually while reading those it opened my eyes to gimmick verses, I will be hard pressed to do another with out some tremendous concept behind them
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