Cool battle. Enjoyed it thoroughly. Going purely on instinct and what intrigued me more, the former verse had me chuckling a lot. The latter with meth tossed off the boat/weight loss was pretty funny. These are funny, because they're more comedy orienated rather than direct confrontation. It's funny, because these are considered punchlines but they're things that are considered almost infantile in days past, no? Why is it all of the sudden cool and hip now for it to be done on an entire verse, well mainly 75%. I can't keep up with text trends, nor do I like the politics, rules of it. Lame/boring. But this lotb had me just laughing, and ooing. Insanely funny and well connected, it was awesome.
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ese 4 bars r for u, tell sound there's no reason to loiter
u named urself after a Battleship, knowing damn well it only takes 3 hits to sink a Destroyer
n' don't tell me the above reference was dated or cryptic
I had ur board game pegged b4 u did that Swerve bar like it wasn't played when u flipped it
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Flowed well, it was confident, adjusted and directed well. Done insanely well. I loved it. Favorite bar i've read so far. And for that line alone, it basically jumps heaps over everything their opponent wrote. It seemed like a close battle, - and it was, I just think they edged it a bit here. Destroyer seems to be on task. I like that.
vote /BM
Also this one was pretty funny, the ongoing topic about dissing destros age is particularly repetitive, but, honestly this one was pretty funny, and it made me chuckle, although being old is awesome.
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Destro's latest high school reunion was a gloomy affair
he paid his respects, met his classmates grandkids and then they introduced him to theirs
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The thing is with the humor aspect, its there, but it has more of a witty element to it, but not a play on words,rather than a play on imagery, which is what this verse was coupled with. The wording was precise too, sink a destroyer couldve been worded a thousand different ways by different people but you chose the right approach. I'm also going to choose a few quotables from the opposing team and expand on that since destro just gave me somewhat of a compliment in the chat thread.
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'all ain't shit. u can't even hope for a slow death
call me strik cuz des is bout to go for broke and smoke meth
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For instance, here, it was tough, and the dilemma you faced was coupling broke and meth, without having the wording off (for broke) but you decided to go with it and, no it didnt affect you, but a more picky voter might see that and say it doesnt make sense. I've seen a bunch of this in the tournament thus far, and that will make or break a battle. Depends on the voters mood, which is funny. I liked this as a opener and it hit fairly well. Cool
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keep fucking with des. watch. u will be in some trouble dude
watchin transporter on Netflix, is the ONLY way cats are seein a BM W
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Wholly stretched imo! Not bad,but the reference was so far-fetched, you had a thousand different options to make it more reminiscent, no? Idk that's just me, this was cool, and your verse was riddled with jabs like this. A solid consistent verse, but as stated before, the make and breaking point was the humor and the elements coupled with it, imagery, humor, and I guess, 'punchlines'. Enjoyable, as I said. Good day to you gents