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Old 08-14-2014, 07:24 PM   #2
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I tried to quote it on my phone but my phone's stupid, but the manuscript line was the best of this. That gave me them feels, brah. The rhyming was the star out of all if this though, specifically the first half. Great flow to that section even though I felt it started to fall off after the manuscript line. This was still very good though, but I do enjoy the feels especially the last one you wrote. Good to see you dropping, Witty.
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