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Pharaohs Army · 08-14-2014, 06:34 PM

i like the way it flows.. most of it is very vague to me but perhaps you did that intentionally..

"Adorned by mankind,
A morning journey performed by a land slide,"

really liked that couplet structure-wise.

08-14-2014, 06:34 PM	#3
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	i like the way it flows.. most of it is very vague to me but perhaps you did that intentionally.. "Adorned by mankind, A morning journey performed by a land slide," really liked that couplet structure-wise.